What I love about others being invested in my story: More people to catch mistakes or add consistency.

I was just describing my newest scene to Jay (I picked up a jingle bell to put away and saw I was smiling *way* too much for an “overthrow” scene)

But he was a bad-guy, so it’s okay to be thrilled, right?

Jay’s response was to question when the shooter acquired the skill.  So now I’ve got notes for tonight for where the add the evidence.  I like what it does for character development…. Maybe the kids’ll nap today and I’ll get to it sooner…