{"id":236,"date":"2013-10-08T00:57:54","date_gmt":"2013-10-08T08:57:54","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.writinghope.com\/?p=236"},"modified":"2018-09-26T08:50:25","modified_gmt":"2018-09-26T16:50:25","slug":"pick-a-problem-nano-prep-8","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/WritingHope\/pick-a-problem-nano-prep-8\/","title":{"rendered":"Pick a Problem (NaNo Prep 8)"},"content":{"rendered":"<blockquote><p>If you can\u2019t solve it, it\u2019s not a problem\u2013it\u2019s reality. &#8212; Barbara Colorose<\/p>\n<p>Do not pray for easy lives. Pray to be stronger men! Do not pray for tasks equal to your powers. Pray for power equal to your tasks. &#8212; Phillips Brooks<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>You really need to pick a problem. It&#8217;s not optional.<\/p>\n<p>Better yet, have a series of problems in mind. Because, really, problems are what make a story.<\/p>\n<p>Here are a few problem types to brainstorm:<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li>\n<div id=\"attachment_495\" style=\"width: 310px\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\"><a href=\"http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/WritingHope\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/three-punch-smaller.jpg\"><img aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-495\" decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-495\" src=\"http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/WritingHope\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/three-punch-smaller-300x225.jpg\" alt=\"Image courtesy of Agi Ambrezewicz via stock.xchng\" width=\"300\" height=\"225\" srcset=\"http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/WritingHope\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/three-punch-smaller-300x225.jpg 300w, http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/WritingHope\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/three-punch-smaller-268x200.jpg 268w, http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/WritingHope\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/three-punch-smaller-700x525.jpg 700w, http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/WritingHope\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/three-punch-smaller.jpg 922w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><p id=\"caption-attachment-495\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Image courtesy of Agi Ambrezewicz via stock.xchng<\/p><\/div>\n<p><strong>The opening problem<\/strong>. What is your MC working on when the story opens? S\/he <a href=\"http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/making-characters-interesting\/\">shouldn&#8217;t be standing around doing nothing until the villain acts<\/a>, because then the villain gets to be all active, aka <em>way cooler.<\/em><\/li>\n<li><strong>The first big surprise<\/strong>. aka <a href=\"http:\/\/storyfix.com\/story-structure-series-4-%E2%80%93-the-most-important-moment-in-your-story-the-first-plot-point\">first plot point<\/a>. SOMETHING comes along and slaps the MC upside the head so s\/he has to make a <strong>big choice<\/strong>. This is what spins him or her off into the story idea: that exciting idea that made you want to write the book.<\/li>\n<li><strong>The problem of what the MC is going to do with problem #1.<\/strong> Star Wars squished problem #1 by charbaking Luke&#8217;s reason to stay home (the people who raised him), but there are other options as well.\u00a0 Combining goals is one of them. Another tension-building option is to have old goals and new goals in conflict, and having to choose between two goods.<\/li>\n<li><strong>The Problem that will have to be solved before the end.<\/strong><\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p>One of my favorite &#8220;formulas&#8221; for a story (a way of defining <em>is this a story?<\/em>) is to look for the PPP&amp;O.\u00a0 Does it have:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Place<\/li>\n<li>Person<\/li>\n<li><strong>Problem<\/strong><\/li>\n<li>Outcome.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<div id=\"attachment_498\" style=\"width: 289px\" class=\"wp-caption alignleft\"><a href=\"http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/WritingHope\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/look-away-punch-smaller1.jpg\"><img aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-498\" decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-498\" src=\"http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/WritingHope\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/look-away-punch-smaller1-300x200.jpg\" alt=\"Image courtesy of Asif Akbar via stock.xchng\" width=\"279\" height=\"186\" srcset=\"http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/WritingHope\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/look-away-punch-smaller1-300x200.jpg 300w, http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/WritingHope\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/look-away-punch-smaller1-700x466.jpg 700w, http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/WritingHope\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/look-away-punch-smaller1.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 279px) 100vw, 279px\" \/><\/a><p id=\"caption-attachment-498\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Image courtesy of Asif Akbar via stock.xchng<\/p><\/div>\n<p>In short-short stories and folktales a formula like this is particularly useful in distinguishing between a true <em>story<\/em> and a simple <em>anecdote<\/em>. Take for example this &#8220;reverse story&#8221; from Elizabeth Marie Pope&#8217;s <a href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.com\/Perilous-Gard-Elizabeth-Marie-Pope\/dp\/0618150730\/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&amp;ie=UTF8&amp;qid=1381213390&amp;sr=1-1&amp;keywords=perilous+gard\"><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">Perilous Gard<\/span><\/a> (One of<a href=\"http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/2007\/10\/major-novels\/\"> my all-time favorite novels<\/a>. There&#8217;s a free tip: be able to name your favorite novels and delineate what makes them favorites. That will help you with your <a href=\"http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/WritingHope\/create-your-like-lists-nano-prep-3\/\">like-lists<\/a>, too.).<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>&#8220;What happened while I was away, Tom?&#8221;<br \/>\n&#8220;The dog died, Master.&#8221;<br \/>\n&#8220;How did the dog die, Tom?&#8221;<br \/>\n&#8220;When the house burned down, Master.&#8221;<br \/>\n&#8220;How did the house burn down, Tom?&#8221;<br \/>\n&#8220;One of the candles at your wife&#8217;s funeral, Master.&#8221;<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Definitely a startling and memorable exchange, but it lacks half the elements necessary to be an actual story.<\/p>\n<p>It is not enough to shovel misery on a protagonist. Pain, while important in real life, does not constitute a story-sized problem until it forces the Character(s) to ACT. (If they won&#8217;t or can&#8217;t act, why are we reading about them?!)<\/p>\n<p>That&#8217;s the importance of the opening quote.\u00a0 What makes a good problem is one that can be solved. Super-bonus-awesomeness if the solution is original and unanticipated by the reader.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_497\" style=\"width: 310px\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\"><a href=\"http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/WritingHope\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/Karate-kick-Smaller.jpg\"><img aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-497\" decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-497\" src=\"http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/WritingHope\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/Karate-kick-Smaller-300x194.jpg\" alt=\"Image courtesy of Linden Laserna via stock.xchng\" width=\"300\" height=\"194\" srcset=\"http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/WritingHope\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/Karate-kick-Smaller-300x194.jpg 300w, http:\/\/untanglingtales.com\/WritingHope\/wp-content\/uploads\/2013\/10\/Karate-kick-Smaller.jpg 459w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><p id=\"caption-attachment-497\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Image courtesy of<br \/>Linden Laserna via stock.xchng<\/p><\/div>\n<p>To summarize, You need a problem. Stories are made of problems. These can be internal, external, personified, impersonal. The point is to pick one and make it HUGE&#8211; because it is through overcoming this problem that your main character (and the reader) learns what s\/he is made of.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>You need a problem. Stories are made of problems. These can be internal, external, personified, impersonal. 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